Oh, I see. Learn something new every day. Though eh, if it’s informal slang that doesn’t appear in the dictionary, then it’s kind of not totally acceptable officially, is it?
Story writing, especially when it comes to dialogue, is not formal writing.
Characters would be pretty boring if they all followed formal writing style and grammar guides in their speech. Nobody would be able to use a dialect or accent.
Goddamn that was so hilarious!
Can’t stop laugh while reading.
And this guard guy so-o-o smart he’s just cracked me up!
Thanks for the new chapter Doki!
All the descriptive text the kerning/letterspacing is very inconsistent “In a world with SWORDS…”
The sw is spaced too tightly and there’s a gap bwteen the w & o. FIx this by changing the kerning mode from metrics to optical.
Also on all the faux handwritten/dialog text (eg “my fairly experienced…) – it’s spaced too tightly and looks bad. Increase the tracking and thin the letters slightly.
Monday 17th April 2017 
10:17 PM 
I’m very glad you guys picked this up and are continuing it…
I’m enjoying a freaking lot
So thanks for the awesome job!
The last page killed me
Thanks
Lol. This stuff is pretty funny. Thanks for the chapter.
Page 4, top right frame: “geeze” < "geez".
Both are accepted spellings, among about ten others, being an informal slang that doesn’t appear in the dictionary.
Oh, I see. Learn something new every day. Though eh, if it’s informal slang that doesn’t appear in the dictionary, then it’s kind of not totally acceptable officially, is it?
Certainly not in a venue that thrives on formality and orthodoxy like doki fansubs! gasp!
Story writing, especially when it comes to dialogue, is not formal writing.
Characters would be pretty boring if they all followed formal writing style and grammar guides in their speech. Nobody would be able to use a dialect or accent.
That is true. Ignore my comment.
Goddamn that was so hilarious!
Can’t stop laugh while reading.
And this guard guy so-o-o smart he’s just cracked me up!
Thanks for the new chapter Doki!
Is that a “Welcome to Corneria” reference with the guard?
Goblin is very boring to me. Oh well, I gave it a shot.
Goblin finds you boring as well. :p
The kerning is bad on this one
All the descriptive text the kerning/letterspacing is very inconsistent “In a world with SWORDS…”
The sw is spaced too tightly and there’s a gap bwteen the w & o. FIx this by changing the kerning mode from metrics to optical.
Also on all the faux handwritten/dialog text (eg “my fairly experienced…) – it’s spaced too tightly and looks bad. Increase the tracking and thin the letters slightly.